Liked the plot and the simple narration, a quick and connecting read. A little more romance between the first couple could have added more love to it.
Liked the turn at the end, quite unexpected, all in all nicely penned down. Appreciate the grip on the plot. powerful and captivating. Next from the author should be a comedy
Re: I was messed up
A very gripping read, great plot and turns of fate. I couldnt possibly get over it, couldnt leave it in between. Great job. A well organised lucid explanation